Anna McCarthy, from the Just a Jesus Follower blog, says in her article "I went to a Strip Club,"
“I love people.
Especially ones who are broken; it’s part of my calling. But, given what I’ve
walked through, I know how fragile broken people can be.
And I know how insensitive the church can be.
And I was uneasy.
But, these weren’t just any pastors wives.
They had a vision.
One that longed to love on women that society had thrown aside.
It reminded me a lot of Jesus.
So, I jumped on it.
Their plan was to visit these clubs once a month to deliver a
meal and gift baskets. I joined them the first night and I’ll be honest, I
had NO IDEA what to expect.”
I love this lady’s work. She is a great example of using sentence
structure to uppercut your readers right in the jaw.
It is short.
It is powerful.
It takes no prisoners.
I think her vocabulary
selection, and the structure she chooses (short sentences, favoring periods)
sends a more stark, blunt and precise message than if she had chosen more
artsy, lengthy sentences.
Her writing incorporates a
secret element: surprise. The writing style is not what we expect. It creates
interest.
I would highly recommend reading this whole article. It is worth
the read. The topic of this article is about catching yourself in your own
assumptions and being a better follower of Jesus. It is calling the readers out
and telling them they are doing it wrong.
I think the structure of the sentences is another vehicle that
drives that message home.
I like this style of writing. It's short and to the point. But it also gets the message across. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThe title of your post is what made me want to read it, so well done on that. But I also appreciate this style of writing as well. It is a style that if I were to read out loud, I can imagine how the author would want it read.
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